Sunday, April 13, 2008

The girl who didn't get a seat

          The sun was at its high. The high temperature, the dust winds and a long queue for seat reservation in the K.S.R.T.C bus had made it a hell of the day for me. The queue was so long that I couldn’t get on to three buses in a row and was lucky to get on in the fourth.

           I was on my way back home from Coimbatore. It was holiday season and the bus was packed with students and other people, all going home for the holidays.

           It was just before the engine let out its first grunt that she got into the bus. She would be one of those unlucky students who belonged to the private colleges of Tamil nadu. None of the seats were vacant and she had to position herself near a vertical holding bar.

           She was too thin for her age and the large backpack she carried seemed too heavy for her. Her eyes were sunken and had dark circles around them. Her hair looked like an overused broomstick.

           Tiredness was showing on her face. Often she dozed off on to the vertical bar she was holding. She looked around after each stop of the bus for an empty seat but in vain. Only few were getting down and their seats were being occupied even before they got up.

           The bus was silent except for the noise produced by an exhausted engine and the sound of metal body craning against the chassis. The hot humid Palghat wind had wiped away all the energy of the passengers.

            I was feeling dizzy and was dozing off when the silence was broke. A tamil lady was shouting at the girl and she was apologizing. She had dozed off and hit the lady.

            I was feeling sorry for the girl that I felt like giving my seat to her. But I wasn’t sure if she would accept it as I was sitting with two men. I didn’t want to be embarrassed.

             It was Palghat bus stand and one and a half hour since Coimbatore when she finally spotted a seat. She moved towards the seat,pity, only to find it being occupied by another lady.

             It took another one and half hour to reach Thrissur. While getting down I looked for the girl. She was leaning against the side of a seat and the lady in the seat was widening her shoulders and elbowing the girl away from the seat.

15 comments:

  1. so sad to hear it, if u believe, I dint notice her even once though she stood by me all the way from Coimbatore to Trichur... Juz knew a girl wuz standing beside me... I wuz tooo tired and wuz dozing all the way.....

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  2. really sad,even i didn't notice her.
    Anyways nice description. u're improving rappai.
    Arun S

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  3. Nice description!!! Really nice, Sailesh.. And it's amazing that u were the only one to notice her!!

    Pavam penkutty!!

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  4. Hailstone...What do you mean he was the only one to see her. . Ivanu entha oru kurav?
    And sailesh , wonderful viewpoint i must admit. You wouldn't have written abt this girl if she weren't really cute.. Wish i was there too. Interesting that a guy who won't sit with his texts for more than 15 minutes with concentration was so keenly attentive abt an unknown girl.
    :)
    Devidas

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  5. So bad I felt... And it's really a wonderful description dear... Cool entry... I too would 've noticed her, but I won't think the way you did, I guess...Appreciate your humanity...:)

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  6. Devidas.... (in shouting voice -- nadakeeyatha),

    Njan kuravaayittalla.. paranjathu... You are mistaken..
    "Nammude saileshne njan angane kurachu kaanikkuo, devidasae....??" -- again naadakeeyatha..

    Sathyam... njan kurachu kaanichathonnum allo tto.. Take it as an appreciation, sailesh..

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  7. @devi and priya
    entha randu perudeyum udesham

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  8. @devi
    with description ive given,i dont understand what made you think she was cute

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  9. Sailesh..
    Why did you delete that comment..??
    Enikku vaayikkanam..

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  10. never mind,twas mine itself

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  11. fact no.1

    since you were constantly staring at her it is apparent tat she was atleast faintly cute, for sure.

    and fact no.2
    hailstone's comments were provocative and were definitely making a statement regarding you- one that was evidently negative.
    i oppsed it with strong words and here i am re-iterating what i said in a previous occasion.

    and fact no.3
    bristow where the HELL does humanity come into picture here..

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  12. The lack of response from hailstone is nothing but acceptance of guilt.
    And Bristow hasn't got the moolah in the top floor to respond.
    Inference.. I win. :)

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  13. mone dasa
    i thought you knew the rare tastes of our dear sailesh

    so better you think twice before jumping into any conclusions k

    and dear hailstone

    he was not the only one to notice her

    twas just that sailesh was the only one to take such keen notice of the predicament of that girl

    ..........................................
    see guys in class bye

    -logan

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  14. Hey man,if you get a chance to give your seat to anyone,especially girls later,just dont miss it.Thats all I want to say you.

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  15. dat story of u & girl was heart touching..............

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